Plotting Revenge

[Helm]

I should be sleeping.

[Salvage]

loving the violets in the fingers and the red in the scabbard.
careful of different hand sizes.
meassuring palm to middle finger, i see a marked disparity.

[Dusty]

For some reason the guard looks like it has different angle than the scabbard. I think perhaps the guard should be a lot less horizontally visible, and visibly in front of the daggers.

[saimo]

It's tallpixelled

Heh, feeling nostalgic of Amiga's HIRES?

Looks very nice and promising, however - please don't think about beefcake-distorded view - again I feel that the arms are a tad too skinny. Shoulders, moreover, do not look exactly right: the right one looks a bit too flat (something's seems to be wrong with its volume) and the left one too bent forward.
As always, well, that's just my inexpert opinion...

saimo

[Ryumaru]

i think the arms look fine after you took into account turbo's critique, very skinny, yes - but we all have our idealizations. Do you plan for a background?

[Helm]

Yeah, darkened tavern. Edge of a table, a spilt tankard of beer, perhaps some garlic in the background! Don't get too excited though, it'll mostly be from-darkness-arises-small-moodsetting-detail.

[Ryumaru]

Well that still sounds pretty enticing to me : D
( you should fit the yus bird on a tree branch in a broken window : o)

[Helm]

Still working on the rendering. Various small fixes.

[Dusty]

Still think even that guard needs to be drawn in front of the daggers, or the angle of the scabbard changed.

[Sherman Gill]

New sword hilt and the daggers are groovy
Face is a bit angular for my taste, though, and- this is my main problem with the piece -the red on the shirt seems out of place. It looks like it'd be trim for some super-fancy nobleman's platemail, not some bastard swordsman scum, which is what I presume this guy is. I think you should go with... a cheaper color and maybe less rigid fabric. Something more appropriate for the time and person?