Grand Cafe 'The Bollard'

[Lunar]

Looks great!  Nice style.  Shadows and stuff would definatly give it more depth and such, but its a WIP.

One thing I did notice was the smoker's much to static seated position.  Maybe have him lean over the table deep in conversation with the other guy, like in this quick edit:

Good luck,

-Lunar

[lollige]

Thats very nice lunar! Ill try that myself too!
I will also ad some shadows.


If you watch the very low left corner, you see two people sitting (not on the actual drawing). One is very static, one is very loose.
What do you think of them? I personally do not have a real favorite, and I think they both could be better.

[Lunar]

Yeah, I like the loose one much better.  I usually sit with my arms in my lap, instead of to my sides, so this edited sitting stance could be a varient or somthing:


-Lunar

[lollige]

So here we have the nice sitting people and the shadows:

[lollige]

and its done!

[abra71]

some texture on the walls and ground/floor would be nice