AuthorTopic: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!  (Read 152099 times)

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #480 on: April 04, 2006, 05:13:00 pm

I'm not satisfied with it... Maybe some C+C would help.
Heading to the Portrait.
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #481 on: April 04, 2006, 10:01:42 pm
Hmm, the hair has kinda... meh... contrast. Try using more white in the area where the lightsource is on his hair. I'm really loving the shading on the pant legs, though. o: But it seems like he could use more shading around his groin. Some shading on the lower side of (his) left arm would make it look real nice, too. You've really got a really awesome design going, can't wait to see the end result. :3

And speaking of results... I've finished my sprite and portrait. xD If you do add it, dear Steve, please link me at http://stitchy.deviantart.com/ because uh... I've got nothing else. Anyways, here they are:
Be it, so be quick
Donít run, just walk and walk and walk
Donít lose yourself, to decorate
Somewhere on your wall 'Cause somewhere in your mind You know you are doing fine Holding secret hair locks Youíll pluck before you hide

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #482 on: April 04, 2006, 10:47:13 pm
Stitchy, that completely rocks my socks.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #483 on: April 04, 2006, 11:21:12 pm
so... new fav ^^ <3 stichy's sprite
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #484 on: April 04, 2006, 11:41:34 pm
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I just read the rules again and there's one thing I'm not sure of...the character must of our creation or we can sprite whoever we want?
You can sprite anything you want, as long as it's an original idea by you.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #485 on: April 05, 2006, 05:13:51 am
looking back at my old one, it sucks immensely :D. at least the portrait did.
rough lines and basic colors;

some lineart.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #486 on: April 05, 2006, 05:18:45 am
Stitchy, I love that character design.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #487 on: April 05, 2006, 05:48:54 am
hey

@Seven: Well firstly I think it's another cool designed fighter :). Now I think his hair looks quite flat, and maybe so to the face? I also find it hard to distinguish his arm from his body, I think you maybe need to hilight his arm more, and give the appearance of greater space between them. Anyhows that's all for now.

edit:

I quickly done an edit to show you what I mean...hope ya don't mind? Also, for his right arm, I didn't change any actual form, just changed the shades.

Ohh, I just noticed that it looks like his right arm rist band is somewhat connected to the band/belt around his body. I think you need to break them apart, well I just quickly updated my edit to show you this. Ohh me again, lol... just realised now it was the his skin between his cloth and gloves, but it did look to me somewhat like a rist band oddly blending/connecting with the belt around his body. ;)

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #488 on: April 05, 2006, 06:37:32 am


Well, I think it's done. I'm not too satisfied with the pants, though. It's using many more colors than it should; a massive 15. I'll admit I did poorly with the color management.[almost hard to believe I used more colors on one sprite today than I used for a whole scene yesterday] If it seems small compared to the other fights, it's because I'm a short person ;D. Portrait will be in the works soon.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #489 on: April 05, 2006, 08:07:37 am
@Seven: Sweet work on the pants, but the whole upper body seems a bit iffy to me, the anatomy on the arms don't look right, and the skin tight outfit doesn't suit him.

@Stitchy: Teach me.

@Setz: I'm the opposite, I like the pants, but the shading on the shirt really weirds me out. The folds look a bit unrealistic. Also, I'm not sure whats going on with the head and left hand (right side from our perspective).