AuthorTopic: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!  (Read 132733 times)

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #390 on: February 13, 2006, 07:23:17 am
ok, done with the fighter, now onto the portrait


You kept the thin arm? Meh *shrug*

And sohashu, feel free to use them as long as you credit them to me...
« Last Edit: February 13, 2006, 07:25:09 am by Xero »

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #391 on: February 13, 2006, 08:03:31 am

A near finished version.  Do you like the human or demon sorta theme better?

« Last Edit: February 13, 2006, 08:05:44 am by Sohashu »
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #392 on: February 13, 2006, 09:05:54 am
Blashphemy. Mr. H would never use a sword!

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #393 on: February 13, 2006, 09:29:58 am
Who is Mr. H?
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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #394 on: February 13, 2006, 12:52:25 pm
oh xero, well i kinda wanted his arm to be outward after a while, but forgot to widen it, ill edit after school. :)

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #395 on: February 13, 2006, 09:34:12 pm
No one ever comments on my work.
And I am finally seeing that you were the one worth eating.

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #396 on: February 13, 2006, 10:01:16 pm

ok i added a sword to the back and widened the forearm, im done, now on to the portrait.

ill comment gnd, its a wip right?
i like the shape of it, i would just add details like a face, weapon, chest cannon, stuff like that. maybe some red stripes would look nice.
« Last Edit: February 13, 2006, 10:19:01 pm by JWW »

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #397 on: February 14, 2006, 04:50:17 am
No one ever comments on my work.
Is it done? Are you going to detail it? ATM, it looks really cool, but that's about it. It's like a plastic template : featureless.

Sohashu:
Increase the contrast to better match the pants.
You might want to look at a few pixel art tutorials and pick up on a few techniques like selout and aa. You've also got some anatomy issues.
The hand holding the sword looks far too small. The outstretched forearm looks broken. (I'd be worried if my arm bent like that.) The leftmost hand also looks broken. The head is very (no offense) unattractive. Lower the eyes about 2px., add some details to the mask, and fix that chunk in the back of his head.
It looks like you've got some stray pixels by the waist. The flesh-colored ones.
You've got light colors adjacent to dark colors. Might wanna add a buffer in between.

JWW:
Wow, you're showing incredible improvement. *thumbs up!*

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #398 on: February 14, 2006, 04:53:35 am
No one ever comments on my work.

no worries - nobody commented on mine way back on page 7

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Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!

Reply #399 on: February 14, 2006, 05:03:50 am
No one ever comments on my work.

no worries - nobody commented on mine way back on page 7
That's because it was flawless.  ;)
Well, not quite. Add a flag on his back. A tattered and torn flag. And make his eyes more expressive.
Finish it.