Hey SeinRuhe, thanks for the nice words!
I did do some more work on the girl, but I'm still open to change so I will look for some useful references that can help me increase the desperation and panic. I'm sensing it will be tricky (will have to google 'woman in pain' in incognito mode
) but watch this space and I'll see if I can come up with a good alternative. The party isn't over yet.
For now, here's what I've been doing earlier today.
EDIT: On closer inspection, I really like the pose you did. Just took me a while to get it.