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Louse - ChaosDesign

on: August 31, 2008, 12:44:53 pm
Well Hello everyone I have been around here for a while and finally decided that it was time to post some of my work.
I have only been pixeling for around 7 months now and here is what I have to show you which i think is worthy of these forums.  :)



Any C & C. :y:

Have manged to use 10 colors.

Here is the original which was my first pixel art for any one who is interested.
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/9941/louseoldchaosdesigntmfo5.png

So any C & C is very welcome.

For the next part of this design i will animate it some how just not sure yet. ???
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Re: Louse - ChaosDesign

Reply #1 on: August 31, 2008, 03:24:51 pm
Well if I didn't read the thread title I probably wouldn't know what this was. Giving it some features of a different color or something else that would stand out would help. Maybe give it a red "eye" like the original? I'm not sure how much this would help, but it looks like it needs something more.
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Re: Louse - ChaosDesign

Reply #2 on: August 31, 2008, 03:46:23 pm
Tbh, I think the original you showed you, had more... of a concept, than the one you've pixeled.

maybe it isn't as nice, but i could clearly see it was a Louse, without looking at the title for reference.
I think the one you've shaded, is too.. "Furry" and not smooth enough for a louse.

Good luck :]
Hope my C+C helped.

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Re: Louse - ChaosDesign

Reply #3 on: August 31, 2008, 04:20:22 pm
umm ok thats i can see what u mean it was just a simply try to see what the outcome would be form simply pixel placement.

update.

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