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Civil Disobedience

on: September 05, 2008, 10:08:16 pm
Since PJ isn't critting much (probably due to the size of the piece) I thought I'd post it here and fish for help on improving.

http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/35445.htm

Thanks, guys.  :-*
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Re: Civil Disobedience

Reply #1 on: September 06, 2008, 03:15:52 pm
How about actually posting the picture? Do not expect people to click links.
There are no ugly colours, only ugly combinations of colours.

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Re: Civil Disobedience

Reply #2 on: September 07, 2008, 06:29:13 pm
Uh, sure thing.

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Re: Civil Disobedience

Reply #3 on: September 07, 2008, 06:42:28 pm
If you're looking for critique at pixeljoint the WIP forum would be a much better bet than the gallery.
I don't feel the browns used to shad the paper work so well, and you could add rough texture/reddish tint to the bricks, other than that it looks fine (It is small, so there are less flaws to point out)