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Reply #20 on: August 24, 2008, 09:59:35 am
Hi, as you said Lar, I placed some water droplets here and there :



And tried tu put some stalactites, dunno if it's better ...



It does look more frozen but I liked the eyes better as it was before.

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Reply #21 on: August 24, 2008, 11:11:15 am
Pretty awesome color mixing here! I think you need to have less dithering, or to say, more 'solid color to dither' ratio mainly on the jaw. I never liked dithering touching an outline and I believe flat colors would help a bit there to visually clarify. The actual ice and reflections of the pumpkin in it are ace as far as I can tell.

I would also suggest just putting black inside the eyes and in parts of the mouth, more darkness, to signify more depth.

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Reply #22 on: August 24, 2008, 12:47:33 pm
Yes, the dithering on the jaw was harsh. Now it's better, smoother I think. Also added black in the mouth and the eyes.



Thanks Helm  :D

EDIT : redid the leaves
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Reply #23 on: August 24, 2008, 09:47:03 pm
should the two droplets on the forehead be so symmetrical?