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Avatar(Batlorder)

on: August 06, 2008, 08:49:12 pm
I made this topic for my avatars, now this is currently my avatar that i made quickly  ;D Here's the first avatar c&c would be really nice to hear  :)

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Re: Avatar(Batlorder)

Reply #1 on: August 06, 2008, 08:54:47 pm
Could do with some AA, it has some jaggies.

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Re: Avatar(Batlorder)

Reply #2 on: August 09, 2008, 07:21:56 am
hey any ideas for center of the image ? i think that the face just don't fit on it. here's the newest version without face and text.

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Re: Avatar(Batlorder)

Reply #3 on: August 09, 2008, 04:46:41 pm
you could pixel like a pencil or somethin artistic like

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Re: Avatar(Batlorder)

Reply #4 on: August 09, 2008, 07:37:25 pm
Got an inspiration when you said that  :D heh... so i made a man at desert  and a pencil that's drawing that picture so here it is :

(don't say that the man is too thick because i know it already.)

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Re: Avatar(Batlorder)

Reply #5 on: August 11, 2008, 06:59:17 pm
sorry for double posting but here's an update:

any ideas how can i make desert beter ? it's maybe too bright for night but what can i do  ??? i would be thankful for c&c

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Re: Avatar(Batlorder)

Reply #6 on: August 11, 2008, 07:16:45 pm
Needs more contrast between the sky and the Edwardian looking fellow.
Also, look at some pictures of sand/deserts.

and isnt that whole 'batlord' thing a 4chan meam
gross
it might be a one shot deal

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Re: Avatar(Batlorder)

Reply #7 on: August 11, 2008, 09:49:24 pm
The glow on that moon is not pixel art. :-\ Also, keep your light sources consistent! The pencil is lit from the side opposite of the moon and the man has no specific light source at all.

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Re: Avatar(Batlorder)

Reply #8 on: August 22, 2008, 01:58:00 pm
Here's an update:


I decided to make something else to center of the image and made also some other changes into it too. hope you like it  ;D

The glow on that moon is not pixel art.
you were right about that. (i have a bad habit to make things quickly  :))

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Re: Avatar(Batlorder)

Reply #9 on: August 25, 2008, 01:10:40 am
Your text is very hard to read, it hurts my eyes.
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