C+C please.

[joe123]

        Well, thanks to the other topic "Return of the Ninja", It kinda gave me an idea to start a project that my brother had thought of years ago. Before i did drawings of it, but since now i know visual basics, i'm going to make a small game, similar to Ryona, but not a copy
          If anyone thinks that i'm copying her/his idea then i'm not and i'm sorry if you think i am. It just made me think of the project again.
One think that i don't like, on this piece is the SKin colour ]:

Not to good on creating skins.

Anyway C+C Please.

Btw, i haven't added shoes on him yet lol.
edit::
Just noticed something, which i forgot to change.

[michael]

either his torso is too short or his legs are too long. and i think that, as with ryona's, your ninja is bland. he actually isnt very ninja at all. if i were you i would look at lots of ninjas and ninjas in video games. my last point is that you have too much outlining. looking forward to your next move though