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Re: PD Tactics Collab Character

Reply #10 on: May 06, 2021, 08:07:34 pm
Well, next stop on this train and I need a critique on the backview now. To be honest this is kicking my ass in ways I wasn't aware a pixel art piece could.

So my idea is one last round of critiques and send it before I get even more obsessed with it.

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Re: PD Tactics Collab Character

Reply #11 on: May 06, 2021, 09:17:04 pm


I thought the flesh tone was getting mixed up with the belt so I added a pixel there, which covered her cute perky little butt, but (butt?) also shaded her shin and angled her foot a bit more.

But (butt?) that's it.

Well, I tried adding a bit more definition to the skirt too... Not sure if I was successful there.

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EDIT:
Wait, maybe her left foot could use some shading too.


fairy_final_rev5_final_FINAL_thistimeimeanit.png

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EDIT2: The other day I did some changes to her mouth too... See if you like it:


fairy_final_rev5_final_FINAL_thistimeimeanit2.png

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*sigh* Alright... Just... Just one more.
But this time it's a suggestion for the text. Not that much of a change, though, just something I thought could sound nice.
We'd lose the word "garrison" though.



Although it you're using an ascender for the bs and ds, then you could probably have capital letters too..?

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Re: PD Tactics Collab Character

Reply #12 on: May 06, 2021, 10:01:31 pm
@Fskn thank you so, so, so much, you nailed the back view. Sometimes you have to leave the perky little butt to the imagination :/ but well, sacrifices are needed in order to grow!

Text edit is on point too, time to send this to PD!
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Re: PD Tactics Collab Character

Reply #13 on: May 06, 2021, 10:08:40 pm
Awesome. Glad you liked it.