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Water-mill [WIP]

on: June 06, 2008, 07:49:05 am
The work is WIP and need work over many elements, but will be glad for some crit.

The block is for Pixeldam.



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Re: Water-mill [WIP]

Reply #1 on: June 06, 2008, 08:09:51 am
Watermill must be animated.
It's looking great, can't wait to see more. :]

I think the little wheat field would have more shadow from the trees though.
The really long branch also looks a little weird, perhaps make it go into the other bush of leaves and poke out?

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Re: Water-mill [WIP]

Reply #2 on: June 06, 2008, 10:24:14 am
That is beautiful. I agree with Souly the watermill would look fantastic animated.

I'm not sure what else to say, I'd really like to see this develop. good luck with it

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Re: Water-mill [WIP]

Reply #3 on: June 07, 2008, 11:03:24 am
Thanks for suggestion Souly will back again to the wheat when clear terrain levels ;D

Just add one simple building, he is so simple and small because don't want to close line of the stream, for now I dislike his left corner :(

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Re: Water-mill [WIP]

Reply #4 on: June 07, 2008, 02:39:12 pm
Keep up the good work!

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Re: Water-mill [WIP]

Reply #5 on: June 07, 2008, 06:13:37 pm
Wao- though I'm not exactly a fan of "realistic" approach, I must say I am especially impress by how crispy and 3D everything looked. The old man there could use some work though. Maybe slightly longer or something. I'm very much looking forward to this :)

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Re: Water-mill [WIP]

Reply #6 on: June 07, 2008, 06:20:10 pm
some fast update for left part of the small building, I think now is better ...

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Re: Water-mill [WIP]

Reply #7 on: June 08, 2008, 03:57:32 am
How long does awesomeness like that take you? And how do you render work/ what program do you use?

Sokota

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Re: Water-mill [WIP]

Reply #8 on: June 08, 2008, 04:23:39 am
Sokota, if you're looking for a good program that's free I suggest Paint.NET.

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Re: Water-mill [WIP]

Reply #9 on: June 08, 2008, 04:51:18 pm
How long does awesomeness like that take you? And how do you render work/ what program do you use?

Sokota

render ? render with 1px or biggest brush line in PShop

repair contrast and shadows in many areas ... also I'm not so happy with new roof over small building, because for my taste need more wood, but I don't know ...



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