AuthorTopic: Portrait of a woman  (Read 7487 times)

Offline Godslayer

  • 0010
  • *
  • Posts: 369
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile

Re: Portrait of a woman

Reply #10 on: May 24, 2008, 01:00:05 am
Moving to subtler issues. Smile still seem off, Joseph?

How long can the floor creak before it loses its voice?

Offline Helm

  • Moderator
  • 0110
  • *
  • Posts: 5159
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile
    • Asides-Bsides

Re: Portrait of a woman

Reply #11 on: May 24, 2008, 03:11:46 am
This is making some awesome progress. For the interests of SCIENCE ONLY, the following overlay. This is useful to see where you eyeballed wrong, but don't cheap out and just overlay-rework, okay? Keep eyeballing by approximation!



The eyes are pretty good, the mouth is rotated a bit, the nose quite far off, facial construction is pretty good, but she's missing the pointed, lower chin.

Offline Godslayer

  • 0010
  • *
  • Posts: 369
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile

Re: Portrait of a woman

Reply #12 on: May 24, 2008, 03:31:47 pm
Thats really useful Helm, thanks.

How long can the floor creak before it loses its voice?

Offline Helm

  • Moderator
  • 0110
  • *
  • Posts: 5159
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile
    • Asides-Bsides

Re: Portrait of a woman

Reply #13 on: May 24, 2008, 03:43:53 pm
right now the lower part of the mouth, with the highlight on the lip and the shadow under it seems to suggest a crooked mouth.

Offline Godslayer

  • 0010
  • *
  • Posts: 369
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile

Re: Portrait of a woman

Reply #14 on: May 24, 2008, 05:53:39 pm
Right on.



Also, heres my avatar at 1x

How long can the floor creak before it loses its voice?