I notice pillow shading on the face and on a few places on the jacket. Also, this picture has high contrast, which is good, but the darkest shade seems like it was carelessly tossed around and does not blend. It creates the appearence of holes. This picture also looks very flat. The face almost looks like a cardboard cut-out, and there is no sense of roundness in the torso. The jacket colar on our right side is bigger than on the left. There is a good sense of texture in the picture, and the ambient light looks pretty cool altough it might look better if it wasn't so bright. Good work, keep it up.
