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Re: Tiles

Reply #40 on: May 21, 2008, 11:02:17 am
Your stones are very clean and well defined and I think you ought to bring everything else to the same level of definition. Right now tree a bit off that level both the trunk and the crown. I'd get darkest shade on the tree a bit lighter and less saturated. As to foliage, if you work from back to the top you may get better control over it. Here is a rough example. Leaves shapes up to you, perhaps.

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Re: Tiles

Reply #41 on: May 21, 2008, 03:29:28 pm
I don't know if its just me,but the composition of thoose two branches has been bugging me since the beginning.
Maybe move one of the branches a bit up(sloppy edit):
but maybe its just me ???

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Re: Tiles

Reply #42 on: June 24, 2008, 02:01:34 pm
Yes Reo you're right. I will fix that soon :)

Here's an update, refining the leaves.
It's not a major one, just showing, that now I have internet again, I am still working on this and I will finish it.