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Offline joe123

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House.

on: May 11, 2008, 02:07:32 pm
Well... i'm not really sure what kind of house it's meant to be. Probably a mix between a log cabin and somrthing  :blind:

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Re: House.

Reply #1 on: May 11, 2008, 02:09:16 pm
Ditch the brightest shade on the roof.

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Re: House.

Reply #2 on: May 11, 2008, 02:44:07 pm
Better?

« Last Edit: May 11, 2008, 02:47:38 pm by joe123 »

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Re: House.

Reply #3 on: May 11, 2008, 06:13:33 pm
You flipped one of the windows, looks like two lightsources ;o
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Re: House.

Reply #4 on: May 11, 2008, 10:02:35 pm
the shades on the roof are a bit confuse...where's suposed to be the sun? left? right? top?
look. if the roof is round, it would have a side darkened and a side lightened, not the same luminosity along the whole surface. Think of that. Put the lightsource in a virtual position and keep it there, remember where the light comes from and where the shadows are projected to.
This can look much better. Try it and do it ;)

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Re: House.

Reply #5 on: May 12, 2008, 01:38:31 am
Rough Edit... Hope it helps.
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