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Offline Grynz

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Tree

on: April 23, 2008, 05:17:35 am


Critics, edits, everything is welcome.
(Also, please help me in picking a colour scheme)

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Re: Tree

Reply #1 on: April 23, 2008, 07:57:45 am
i'd suggest that you split the leaves in 2 or 3 "plates" rather than a single one like here -- which gives your tree a kind of mushroom style
also, (imho) your trunk should start having branches earlier.

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« Last Edit: April 23, 2008, 07:59:22 am by PypeBros »

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Re: Tree

Reply #2 on: April 23, 2008, 06:37:41 pm
I've not got much to say about the rest, but the middle on with the different coloured bands on the truck look a little cheap, just recoloured, if they were seperated more by shading and not just colour...if you get what I mean...^^;

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Re: Tree

Reply #3 on: April 23, 2008, 09:21:45 pm
Thanks for the crits  :)



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Re: Tree

Reply #4 on: April 25, 2008, 05:04:21 am
Cool! I like the stripe one the best.

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Reply #5 on: April 26, 2008, 04:13:19 am
hey

I think alot of jaggy pixels need attention, and some the highlights smoothed. Also some more attention to the lighting also. But yea, the shading looks a bit messy to me.

I really don't like the highlighted overlap or whatever between each stripe, and actually prefer the original striped tree.

I also think you should add some more branches with leaves right under, and maybe divide the top leaves up as has kinda already been suggested.

Anyhows I'm currently trying todo an edit for ya.

cya