Man, how did I not notice that nose problem? I'll get right on that. But not sure what you mean with the lips...where they meet looks curvular to me, but I guess I could up it a bit. I'll try to fudge with the colors on the face, but it's tough to make them really blend while keeping them that warm-ish orange. And the sweater...well, I took the base color from the picture itself, so it's a sort of blue-ish grey, really. Not a black if you really look at it.
And thank you, I think she is amazingly beautiful as well.

I'll get to work on your crits, and share any more that you may have.
Very slight update:
Fixed the things talked about, or do I need a more drastic update?
Ah yes, and I added the new shade to the hand.