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[Atnas]

I don't think anything will look feminine with those bulky muscles.

But it can help to soften the face.

[Turbo]

Charming characters, good pixel work,, nice palette. But I had to look really close to know which where women, though.

Just go further in feminizing - slimming limbs, waist, longer neck (i just lowered the shoulders), bigger lips.

[Andre]

Did a sword to help you somehow, I'm still learning about pixelation but I now know preety much about 32x32 sprites 
12 colors, only

[ZoSo]

Turbo, i really like what you did with the tummy. I find it really hard to work with these small characters, about each pixel makes a really big difference. Thanks, ill see what i can do to improve, your edit was really helpful.

Andre, hehe.. Its nice, but i dont see how its relevant.

Anyway, this is what ive come up with.. Im sorry if im copying a bit, but yours looked really good .

[Turbo]

Much better, i'd say. Definitely a girl now.

[Cure]

I think you could take the edit a lot further, those square shoulders and wide stance make her look pretty butch, I think perhaps Adam has posted some nice edits for female sprites approximately this size that you might be able to find.
Emphasize the hourglass figure and aim for a more feminine pose/stance.

[Oltar]

I think you may change the hair for the women.
I retouch I did for the face.

[VisMaior]

The wonam still seems huge.

Crappy edit:



Eh? I dont know...

[ter-o]

My quick edit on the shape.. I didn't touch the shading.

[ZoSo]

Thanks for the edits, this is what i did :O.

ter-o, i like what you did with the left leg :O. You kinda changed the hands shape, i cant do that :O.


This is the best i came up with :O.