Odem Forest - The Chronicles

[Cure]

Those doors are fucking huge.  Who's going to help him open them?
And I guess I expected to see less of the roof and patio, you're right, the perspective is strange.

[Dusty]

I think this may be a little more easy on the eyes, and help separates him from his background. It's messy, but you get the idea.

[tocky]

I think it also might be better if you project the house back a tile, something like:

(quick and dirty, i used dusty's edit, i think photobucket jpegized it)

[ndchristie]

both of those edits look drained of life, but take what i say with a grain of salt as my monitor desaturates everything quite a bit.

[Ace]

 

[ndchristie]

 

still, wicked scale argument

[ElementZero]

Thanks for the advice! I have desaturated the house a bit. Furthermore I gave the sidewalls some perspective. I'm quite happy with it now. And only for Cure I placed two adult sprites in front of the doors to show that big doors are necessary 

@Ace: sorry, but your screen seems really too saturated and too bright to me.

Now on to the sword slash animation 

[brianskywalker]

@Ace: sorry, but your screen seems really too saturated and too bright to me.

Don't you mean un-saturated?

I gotta say though, I did like those edits. I think the water could use a bit of desaturation.

[Ace]

It's just me, I like things a bit bright and cutesy. >:

I do like the house's colour now. It's a happy medium. I still have a problem with the background-rocks' AA, though, but if it doesn't seem to bother you, then... XD

[Feron]

That beach scene looks so fucking sweet at 2X resolution.