AuthorTopic: Odem Forest - The Chronicles  (Read 9737 times)

Offline ndchristie

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Re: Odem Forest - The Chronicles

Reply #20 on: March 21, 2008, 07:59:17 pm
I placed two adult sprites in front of the doors to show that big doors are necessary  ;)


Ah!!  thaaaaat's the rub.  your doors aren't too big necessarily, but your people are having some wicked proportional issues.  the old woman i'd say is the only one with reasonable setup, although the old man can pass.  the adult woman has much too long a torso - the bottom of the bottom should be halfway between head and heel, you've got it maybe 3/5ths.  the kids are stylized in a completely different way (super skinny) which suggests to me that they are much taller than you're showing.
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Re: Odem Forest - The Chronicles

Reply #21 on: March 22, 2008, 02:48:14 pm
I'd like to point out that there seems to be some inconsistency in stylization between the beach and forest scenes. The beach has all these really smooth and flowy lines, very stylized clouds and sun, while the forest is grainy and almost realistically rendered. As nice as they are when viewed separately, to me they don't seem to belong in the same game. Very nice stuff overall though.  :y:

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Re: Odem Forest - The Chronicles

Reply #22 on: March 23, 2008, 05:17:59 am
You should really run with this. You got a site?