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Offline MuTiX

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my wip

on: March 12, 2008, 06:39:50 pm
hi all.
some days ago i start new pixel. post wip on pixeljoint. now i post it here. need some c&c. overpaint is also welcome.

some major steps:
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Offline ninjascience

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Re: my wip

Reply #1 on: March 12, 2008, 07:41:34 pm
looks pretty good  :) but I feel sorry for the turtle  :(

The shell looks very flat.  I would add some extra shadows, and where the profile edge is I'd show the large bumps there.
The black and white eye on the turtle really stands out.  Don't use pure black and pure white, they rarely exist in real life.

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Re: my wip

Reply #2 on: March 12, 2008, 08:38:41 pm
i feel asthough the first stage is much better than the laters... has a lot more character and looks better. :)

also that shell looks bad. you need darker tones, and bolder segments on the shell.