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Offline Incendax

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[WIP] Avatar for a friend

on: March 03, 2008, 12:40:52 am
Was working on an avatar for a friend of mine lately, wanted to get some feedback.  Its a hyena-type character, like a gnoll or whatnot.
I found fur to be very challenging to do, after about a dozen different tries at it I came to something I think looks okay.

There's no background yet.  And ignore the reds in the palette at the moment I was considering using reds as part as the background and just threw down some base red colours into my palette to start from.

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Re: [WIP] Avatar for a friend

Reply #1 on: March 03, 2008, 08:15:09 am
good stuff, the eye doesnt look natural though, i think the fur should move around it better, atm it just looks pasted on top of the fur.

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Re: [WIP] Avatar for a friend

Reply #2 on: March 03, 2008, 09:39:53 am
I think his face looks rather flat. I think more shading and highlighting wouldn't hurt.
I think you concentrated on the fur so much that you lost track of volumes, no?