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Offline Kazuya Mochu

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Re: Chibby "me" with a guitar

Reply #10 on: November 28, 2005, 08:04:38 pm
I tryed using color too sugest the foreshortning on the forearm.
hope it looks better. it does to me...

any way, opinions are welcome!



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Offline Peppermint Pig

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Re: Chibby "me" with a guitar

Reply #11 on: November 30, 2005, 01:08:35 pm
add sharp line of light (the gray maybe) above the line for the glasses, or make the frame a bit darker.. can taper it off into a darker color as it reaches the hair.. maybe even skin tone to transition when on the hair... Really good color work. Nice guitar lighting. Should the top end of the guitar go up so high? I know it's bending back a bit, but it seems to raise up a little too much when there should be more foreshortening.

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Re: Chibby "me" with a guitar

Reply #12 on: December 02, 2005, 04:39:40 pm
Ok so this is the final version of it. I dont want to change it more. Not that I don't want to make it better. I just think it's ridiculous to push a thread into something that is so personal :D

any ways, here it is, and thanks to all the contributions it looks Really Better!



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