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Re: Some new stuff

Reply #10 on: February 08, 2008, 03:50:10 am
The whole building seems to be leaning backwards compared to the characters...Otherwise it might be that whole building is far too thin (just comparing the door to the windows shows how wildly of the width of everything is).....either way, something feels skewed.   Also, I'm not sure the dark outline at the bottom of the house really helps--makes it feel separated, you know?

But damn! Your characters reads so well, and they've got a liquidy-plastic aesthetic....really bad ass stuff  :y:
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