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Offline Asturias

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[WIP] Character template

on: January 27, 2008, 12:39:37 am
Comments and criticism would be welcome.  ;D

Offline willfaulds

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Re: [WIP] Character template

Reply #1 on: January 27, 2008, 02:07:09 am
the legs look a little short and his waist is quite thin. these may be style choices but i think the legs need a bit more length and the legs/feet could definitely use some more definition. particularly around the ankles and knees.

otherwise a nice clean start. i don't think your shading quite adds up but i'm sure you will receive the help to improve it.

one last note: try removing some of the shadow around the central chest/breast area. looks a little boob like.