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Re: w.i.p dragon and warrior scene - Update 23rd march

Reply #10 on: March 23, 2008, 12:27:06 pm
I liked the first stance of the dragon before the edit, personally. I think it had a more stalking, closing-in sort of look that really portrayed the fear a dragon can give.
I also really love the sky/clouds. Ace stuff there.

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Re: w.i.p dragon and warrior scene - Update 23rd march

Reply #11 on: March 23, 2008, 11:46:14 pm
A bit more like this?



Bit more done, tweaked the palette too and changed some places.
« Last Edit: March 24, 2008, 02:00:54 am by Terley »
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Re: w.i.p dragon and warrior scene - Update 23rd march

Reply #12 on: March 24, 2008, 10:24:33 am
brillant, love the sky and detailed background yu did so far, and the fire
 only thing i could think of so far is:
-that a part of the wing looks a bit to triangular in comperison with the rest of the wing,
-the neck of the dragon looked better befor your last edit in my opinion
now it doesn't seems as strong and seems to have a strange connection to the body, something seems a bit off , almost like the chest of the dragon ends in the middle of the neck.
- and the cloak of the character seems to be in a way that he couldn't see it almost looks like he's looking inside the hood, could be because he just strated to turn.

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Re: w.i.p dragon and warrior scene - Update 23rd march

Reply #13 on: March 24, 2008, 12:02:54 pm
The eye of the dragon looks cartoony, compared to quite a realistic scene. 

Also the pose of the warrior does not look like he's about to face a fiery dragon, perhaps try something away from the generic hero pose you have going on.

sky is beautiful, and that is perhaps the best pixel-fire i've ever seen.

The volcano should have smoke and flying debris too.

The sword, being metal, would probably be the color of the flames.

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Re: w.i.p dragon and warrior scene - Update 23rd march

Reply #14 on: March 25, 2008, 12:17:02 am
you could use a little less colors
check the shadows from the fire
maybe u could check some magical swords on google

anyways its a GREAT pixel art ;D

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Re: w.i.p dragon and warrior scene - Update 23rd march

Reply #15 on: March 25, 2008, 09:34:03 pm
Thanks for the comments guys really aprechiate your perspectives on this.

This is actually really playing with my head to be honest, Im going against what I would usually do. Mostly because its a request I don't have much room for change, I have to now make the dragon black. And the cape red with gold trimmings, which in my opinion will make the character a bit too samely considering he's going to be red, red and pink skin. It'll be a challenge in itself making the black of the dragon fade into the fire. Oh the stoney floor was supposed to be greyish.

I'll come back with a totally new palette, I may need help with this  :-[

(Prepares for a disaster  :blind:)
« Last Edit: March 25, 2008, 09:37:19 pm by Terley »
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