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Offline iEmo

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My mate Steven

on: December 22, 2007, 05:03:12 am
I have a friend in the army so i figured What the hell and made this little sprite for him, in roughly 5-10mins.
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Re: My mate Steven

Reply #1 on: December 22, 2007, 07:38:34 am
His right leg looks weird, like he's going to fall backwards. Also, you should really increase the contrast and maybe change the colors, with highlights being warmer colors, and shadows being cooler colors.
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Re: My mate Steven

Reply #2 on: December 22, 2007, 02:06:04 pm
You should learn to take more time on your stuff. Why rush it? You're not going to learn anything that way, apart from to not rush it... (unless of course you've already completely mastered PA and decide you wanna speed up your abilities) but still 5-10 minutes is not enough time. Anyway that's all i have to say, good luck on your piece.
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