horse sprite - need crit

[zi]

I have problem with that horse ...

today again start to clear his forms and noises from my last edition and go from
to

but I see that have something wrong and can't understand what head is too small or she is too forward or ... !

Thanks in advance ...

[Mirre]

Made a quick edit. I felt the body of the horse was a bit long for that perspective. Also the legs looked a bit weird, and the hind ones were missing joints. The neck also got very thing towards the head. I made the shading simpler, because you had a bit much shades going on and they distracted from the horse's actual shapes and muscles. There might still be something wrong with the perspective from myedit, but I'm not so good with that stuff.



Hope I helped!

[zi]

thanks Mirre ofcourse helped and I see many my mistakes


As entity: you make his body too short I make him too long maybe must be between two sizes, you make his hoof too small I make them too big and maybe truth is in the middle

else here is my edit

repair too much parts ...
and here is reference from where I watch

and add more characters on which I work in the moment

[skeddles]

Head too small.