Terra Online; Reworking the bases

[Souly]

An RPG based in the world of Terra.
A project I've been working on for a while.

Just recently installed ADR and I want to start making monsters for it.


Example of the avatars.
Some of you may remember this base.
I have a few clothing sets for this base I've made, but I am having problems with female items.
Not used to drawing females so this is a first for me...


Began to work on some Goblins.


Zombie base


Ogre? Orc?


Generic Mushroom

[Vertigo-zero]

pretty nice, clean style, but yhe female clothing isnt the problem... the boobs are :S guess youll need to look at more examples  haha

[Ryan Cordel]

Cute style, but as was said in another thread, the female form looks more like a continous body part. Redefine her main body and legs so they look atleast somewhat seperate.
I did the same mistake before, I know what it is like now thanks to these dudes.

[Souly]

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I made a kid orc and a shitty club/stick.

[Ryona]

Aww, these are so cute! ^_^

I think the breasts of the female goblin are not very well balanced. Her left breast appears much fuller then her right breast. Also it's a little off to the side.
Also I feel her torso around the middle could be slightly narrowed a bit.
I believe that's it.

Oh, by the way, your zombie totally cracked me up. I love the look! 

[MrMister]

The style and perspective makes it look like they'll be in another crappy flash "MMO". 

[Souly]

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Generic mushroom.
Cleaned up some of the lines, and aa'd a bunch.
Also made an evil mushroom.

Aww, these are so cute! ^_^

I think the breasts of the female goblin are not very well balanced. Her left breast appears much fuller then her right breast. Also it's a little off to the side.
Also I feel her torso around the middle could be slightly narrowed a bit.
I believe that's it.

Oh, by the way, your zombie totally cracked me up. I love the look! 

I've never drawn a female. 
So this is my first attempt.
I'll see what I can do.

[Jad]

Sorry to ask, but what is up with the resemblance to the gaiaonline avatars and the name terra online? O:

I'm not grumpy over anything, just a bit curious.

I guess you won't change anything at this stage, but the ball/clog-feet are killing the simplistic design. All simplifies body parts have some resemblance of their real counterparts, except for the feet. You also will have big problems designing delightful shoes for non-feet-like feet ):

[skeddles]

Sorry to ask, but what is up with the resemblance to the gaiaonline avatars and the name terra online? O:

I'm not grumpy over anything, just a bit curious.

I guess you won't change anything at this stage, but the ball/clog-feet are killing the simplistic design. All simplifies body parts have some resemblance of their real counterparts, except for the feet. You also will have big problems designing delightful shoes for non-feet-like feet ):

They don't look anything like Gaia, so dont worry about it soul. Oh, and you should post a link at the top, or in your signature or something.

[Reo]

If I remember correctly(wich I probably dont )Souly first started terra as an parody or something on gaia!He made it becouse I felt that he had wasted his time on gaia(I feel the same)as i said before my memory isn't the best
 
On topic:looking good souly,maybe add a highlight to them?there looking so plain.