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Offline Hyrule_SwordsMan

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Four girls game sprites

on: December 11, 2007, 07:25:27 pm
Hi there
Check these sprites of four different girls
comments? critics?

Updated body, faces and the blue hair

EDIT: the default view is x2
some references:


« Last Edit: December 13, 2007, 09:10:13 pm by Hyrule_SwordsMan »

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Re: Four girls game sprites

Reply #1 on: December 11, 2007, 07:49:53 pm
In the drawings only the first one is 'girly' but looks like a young boy way more.
In your sprites its damn hard to read the bodies. And put on some clothes! :P

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Re: Four girls game sprites

Reply #2 on: December 11, 2007, 10:42:56 pm
Umm, simply long hair does not make a girl D:
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Re: Four girls game sprites

Reply #3 on: December 11, 2007, 10:45:02 pm
Correct, otherwise I'd be a girl!

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Re: Four girls game sprites

Reply #4 on: December 12, 2007, 03:20:23 am
Correct, otherwise I'd be a girl!
You aren't?!?! But you have long hair and ....  everything  :'(

For the sake of staying on topic, I think the girls need a bit more definition. I think the colors of the hair look ok. The body needs some contrast, since it's so light there's no depth and everything looks kind of flat. Also you might want to thin the legs a bit.

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Re: Four girls game sprites

Reply #5 on: December 12, 2007, 04:33:22 pm
I really like the hair on these, especially the second one. However, all their expressions look bored. The reference images are all lookin sort of sassy and confident, so maybe slant the eyebrows a bit or somethin, i dunno.

I think you should also lose a lot of the thickness in the legs, and narrow the shoulders a bit. they all look very... erm... masculine.

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Re: Four girls game sprites

Reply #6 on: December 12, 2007, 11:08:57 pm
I really like the hair on these, especially the second one. However, all their expressions look bored. The reference images are all lookin sort of sassy and confident, so maybe slant the eyebrows a bit or somethin, i dunno.

I think you should also lose a lot of the thickness in the legs, and narrow the shoulders a bit. they all look very... erm... masculine.
yep, specially the 3rd one :S
it's maybe because I started with a man sprite for reference.
I think the 1st one is ok with her body, in exemption of her legs

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Re: Four girls game sprites

Reply #7 on: December 13, 2007, 07:30:27 am
I too, would be vagined..

Right now the boobs look like pecs. Boob them up a little :-[
it might be a one shot deal

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Re: Four girls game sprites

Reply #8 on: December 13, 2007, 02:44:20 pm
Actually, on that small size, I think that the stub-legs are killing any way of defining clothes and details that you may have. Not a good thing, I'd suggest you thin them down a bit.

And, well, breasts are hard to go, but these look a little too saggy for being so stylized. The rest of their bodies look very claydollish while the boobs look very pouch-y.

Umm, just random thoughts. My brain is kind of dead today so critique is all over the place :D
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Re: Four girls game sprites

Reply #9 on: December 13, 2007, 08:57:52 pm

Updated body, faces and the blue hair