Invasion Frenzy Mockup

[JAS]

This is a practice mockup following the rules laid out in the Invasion Frenzy.



Criticism is always welcome, in fact, encouraged.

[sharprm]

looks nice but i dislike the yellow outline for the guy. The outline for the monster works becuase it makes it look radioactive. If the yellow lines are just painted on, then dont think
the way you shaded it is appropriate (looks bevelled). Couldn't u make the bullet have a white highlight to make it look metallic.

[Malor]

Nicely done, the dithering could have been a bit neater, but the lines are quite solid. By the way, I love your website layout, the originality behind the menu was really cool.

[JAS]

Sharprm: The yellow outline is not white because it wasn't in the palette provided.  I would have used white otherwise.   The same thing for the gun as well.

Malor: Thanks for the compliments and checking out the site!

[sharprm]

White or yellow - i think the outline on the guy is unecessary. Pretty sure there is white in the pallete.

The comment about the road lines - just use one yellow color to make it look flat.