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Offline sam-uk

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please criticize my technique

on: November 09, 2007, 10:28:58 pm
Here's something I cooked up in a pretty short time span as more of a test of what i'd be able to create by simply doodling and correcting any mistakes I saw fit. I guess it's two little sumos and one has an afro?.
I'd like some tips on shading and how I should structure my art. How do you usually begin? how do you go about shading?. See anything I could fix up?, thankyou.

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Re: please criticize my technique

Reply #1 on: November 10, 2007, 05:25:24 pm
hmm, to me they look like fine sprites, but not sumos.  they look like a couple of guys at the pool.  sumos are typically recognized (in the states at least) by being very fat with an abstracted happy-face and little topknot hair.
A mistake is a mistake.
The same mistake twice is a bad habit.
The same mistake three or more times is a motif.

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Re: please criticize my technique

Reply #2 on: November 10, 2007, 06:22:15 pm
Aha. I understand. I'm sure there are a few things I could touch up on but I'm happy you think that they're okay.