Carrot Warrior

[lollige]

Carrot warrior, for PJ, lines made by Metaru.


Thats what he made..
He changed arm and pants in next edit too, but I dont have very good one to show cos he edited it when I allready started coloring..



I would not like to have that much comments on the lines, but even more on the colors, coloring technique etc
Tell me what you think, and as usual edits are welcome 

[bengo]

Quick edit, what you mainly need on your piece is more contrast and giving it more form, I also think you should drop the dithering.

[lollige]

Quick edit, what you mainly need on your piece is more contrast and giving it more form, I also think you should drop the dithering.

That was very very very helpfull!
Thank you!


Any1 usefull comments on thatone?

EDIT:
And there without dithering..

I think I like the dithered a bit more, but that could be because I spend more time on it, and the non dithered is just a very quick edit.. however I think both of them look very messy and not that refined

EDIT2:
Im mostly redoing other peoples edits.. but I really learn alot of it!
Thisone is based on an edit of Opacus (huge pants inprovement!)