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Carrot Warrior

on: November 08, 2007, 09:56:19 pm
Carrot warrior, for PJ, lines made by Metaru.


Thats what he made..
He changed arm and pants in next edit too, but I dont have very good one to show cos he edited it when I allready started coloring..



I would not like to have that much comments on the lines, but even more on the colors, coloring technique etc :)
Tell me what you think, and as usual edits are welcome  ;D
« Last Edit: November 09, 2007, 09:03:07 pm by lollige »

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Re: Carrot Warrior

Reply #1 on: November 09, 2007, 03:04:47 am

Quick edit, what you mainly need on your piece is more contrast and giving it more form, I also think you should drop the dithering.

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Re: Carrot Warrior

Reply #2 on: November 09, 2007, 03:23:16 pm

Quick edit, what you mainly need on your piece is more contrast and giving it more form, I also think you should drop the dithering.
That was very very very helpfull!
Thank you!


Any1 usefull comments on thatone?

EDIT:
And there without dithering..

I think I like the dithered a bit more, but that could be because I spend more time on it, and the non dithered is just a very quick edit.. however I think both of them look very messy and not that refined :(

EDIT2:
Im mostly redoing other peoples edits.. but I really learn alot of it!
Thisone is based on an edit of Opacus (huge pants inprovement!)

« Last Edit: November 09, 2007, 09:40:53 pm by lollige »