Zombie Problem

[Bouzolf]

Hello,

I CAN'T GET THIS TO LOOK RIGHT!!

I tried every thing but it still as broken lines and discusting shading and an i-look-ugly bg. Please, help me.


I was originaly for PJ Weekly Chalenge about sombies, but because I coudn't finish it, I'm now late.

[Bouzolf]

Anyone? Please, just say its discosting if it is. I realy want feedback on this. 

[Malor]

I would up the contrast, and work on the lines a lot more, before working on shading. I like that you went for a semi-adventurous palette, but just up the contrast of it.

[JJ Naas]

The head is anatomically very deformed.. and I know it's a zombie but still. The ears are misplaced, the eyes are tiny holes with no sockets, the alignment of the teeth line is strange and the tip of the nose seems to be on top of the front teeth... You should approach this by making first an anatomically correct head and THEN making it mutilated and decayed.

[Bouzolf]

Thanks for comments. 

I'm gonna start over and maybe make it a little bigger.

[Bouzolf]

Ok, so here it is: my new line. I've worked hard on this one, hope you'll like it. I started adding colors but they're not the final ones, just place-holding.



And here are the steps:

1 2

Comments?

[Kon]

Whe shouldn't see the brain so well since theirs like skin and skull between the outside and the brain.
If you anderstand wat I mean

[Bouzolf]

I understand. I even made an edit.



Any better?

PS: Je t'ai pas vu sur Café Salé, toi?

[sharprm]

His left ear doesn't seem right. Maybe should be out more from the head. The part where the teeth are showing needs to have a jaw showing not just teeth. Big improvement keep it up.

[Andy Tran]

I understand. I even made an edit.



Any better?

PS: Je t'ai pas vu sur Café Salé, toi?

  You got good form of him down man. Add some cracks. Details details details... like that. Increase the contrast. Some selout would work for this zombie. Here's an edit to help you out man.

 

 Peace