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No ideas for cutes monstars

on: October 21, 2007, 11:53:31 am
hi everyone !

I was borred and i saw in PJ, this piece

I was a lot inspired by this so I decided to do something similar (not too much )



I've done 6 monsters for moment, but I want it to be a big/huge piece (a little like this)
But I've no ideas for others (cutes) monster...

1st is a ghost
2nd and 3rd are "blobs" (grass and fire)
4th is a lil' yellow demon
5th is an octopus bull soldier
6th is the octopus bull king

I don't want things like goblins, zombie and all the classical stuff...
If someone wants to help me, you're welcome !

And C+C are very apreciated too

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Re: No ideas for cutes monstars

Reply #1 on: October 21, 2007, 01:07:04 pm
the fire 'blob' don't look ltoo much like fire I'm afraid.


try pushing the color a bit more so it's vivid bright reds, oranges, yellows, (and blues for the cooler part of the flame) - and don't have it shaded as thought the light is from the front... IT IS THE LIGHT!

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Re: No ideas for cutes monstars

Reply #2 on: October 21, 2007, 04:19:12 pm
(and blues for the cooler part of the flame)

Isn't blue the hottest part of the flame?

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Re: No ideas for cutes monstars

Reply #3 on: October 21, 2007, 04:39:08 pm
 :ouch:
I dunno...

Did I say I was a phycicist?

... the bits at the tips, of each flame I turn towards a bluey tinge... if that's the hottest part I dunno... generally I don't go putting my hand in fire to find out.
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Re: No ideas for cutes monstars

Reply #4 on: October 21, 2007, 05:15:54 pm
red : hot
orange : very hot
yellow : very very hot
blue : very very very hot
green : very very very very hot
I don't know the following

Also I've made the "blobs" more slimey and 2 new characters arrived (white is a ice dude with a scarff and the green is a kappa (yokai) :


c+c ?

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Re: No ideas for cutes monstars

Reply #5 on: October 21, 2007, 05:39:07 pm
Fire color depends on material, don't it?
Magnesium burns super bright white, don't it? And I know there's a chemical that burns purple or something.
But yes, usually blue is a super-hot part of a fire, but I don't think you'd want to use it for the blob.
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Re: No ideas for cutes monstars

Reply #6 on: October 21, 2007, 05:41:10 pm
Frost, these are pretty cute. I think the slime looks better but the fire slime's symbol on his forehead still looks like a stick. I think most of his body should be covered in fire. Also the bull king should be a bit more bigger or at least more noble instead of a palette switch with a different hat.

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Re: No ideas for cutes monstars

Reply #7 on: October 21, 2007, 05:53:19 pm
I think most of his body should be covered in fire.

Yes but if all of his body is covered in fire, we don't see that is a slime, I want a blob, not a flame

Also the bull king should be a bit more bigger or at least more noble instead of a palette switch with a different hat.

Yah...You're right but when I did this i don't wanted to remake it completly and blah blah...Yes you're right I am lazy. but I like it as he is now, A little king with a BIG crown. he looks little, ridiculous and frail but he has the power of the king you see ?

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Re: No ideas for cutes monstars

Reply #8 on: October 21, 2007, 05:56:52 pm
Mine ->     <- Yours
A few colors changed, mainly red, and I made the Jellys more Jelly.
Plus, the Kappa's mothafuckin' gangsta now.
Mostly, I think you need to brighten up the red on the jelly, particularly the crest. And to make it more firey without losing its gelatin appearance, you can hueshift the red to yellow.
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Re: No ideas for cutes monstars

Reply #9 on: October 21, 2007, 06:03:42 pm
sorry but I only like that you did on the grass slime, and also on the fire one, but ou made the red brighter and now the red bull octopus hurts my eyes  :ouch:

That edit helped me for the blobs reflects, I've not the time to modifie mine now :/ Tomorrow I'll work on it, thanks