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Re: Mockup Frenzy #5: Horrorween!

Reply #40 on: October 25, 2007, 01:35:40 am
Well, I hate posting WIPs, but I'm pretty sure that I'll give up if I don't.  I'm very rusty and tiles were always a weakness of mine to begin with.

I'd appreciate heavy critique and any and all of this, in particular the face, gun, and seats.  All my tiles always come out so bland.

The floorboards are not tiled, just trying out stuff to see what works.

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Re: Mockup Frenzy #5: Horrorween!

Reply #41 on: October 25, 2007, 12:28:54 pm
Darien: perhaps lighten the background, its very dark and its hard to see anything...
pay attention to backwards!

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Re: Mockup Frenzy #5: Horrorween!

Reply #42 on: October 25, 2007, 02:39:50 pm
Darien: perhaps lighten the background, its very dark and its hard to see anything...

Disagree. Monitor issues?

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Re: Mockup Frenzy #5: Horrorween!

Reply #43 on: October 25, 2007, 06:15:39 pm
Too dark for me too. But i have ~8 years old monitor.

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Re: Mockup Frenzy #5: Horrorween!

Reply #44 on: October 25, 2007, 06:21:37 pm
dark, but readable enough (calibrated my monitor yesterday ;))

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Re: Mockup Frenzy #5: Horrorween!

Reply #45 on: October 25, 2007, 11:50:30 pm
In my monitor is really hard to read, I though it was a naked man o.O but he seems to be wearing a jacket at x2

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Re: Mockup Frenzy #5: Horrorween!

Reply #46 on: October 26, 2007, 06:30:32 pm
Atum:  That 3rd WIP is really awesome!  But I think the light in the doorway is almost too bright and too big for the doorway.
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Re: Mockup Frenzy #5: Horrorween!

Reply #47 on: October 26, 2007, 11:09:15 pm
Thanks Atum, your second attempt a huge improvement in color and composition. Keep it up!

Griffy, that second one truly is terrifying :^))



WIP4. Gonna keep the small head. Up to 24 colors so far. Not gonna worry about separate sprite/background palettes. Sentence fragments. Weeee.

maybe make her mouth a bit smaller by 1 pixel? :o
it looks so big...
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Re: Mockup Frenzy #5: Horrorween!

Reply #48 on: October 29, 2007, 04:59:58 am
[WIP 2]


Not much of an update, and I probably won't finish in time.  :yell:

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Re: Mockup Frenzy #5: Horrorween!

Reply #49 on: October 31, 2007, 10:19:24 pm


final  :D