Walking

[smiker]

I Have been working on this animation since yesterday, can it get some critics?

[miscdude]

it looks like hes angry when he walks, not so much...just a stroll...but i dont know what you were going for.
lighting seems off, especially on his head, where the lighting comes from above, while everywhere else the lighting comes from the right.
i dont think it looks good with skin-tight clothes, but that might just be me.
his elbow joint seems misplaced...

normal:
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yours:
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if that odd diagram helps any...
finally, his head is very oddly shaped....

the animation is nice and smooth though ^^ goodjob on that.

[Xion]

Hm, the elbow seems fine to me. It's just a bit foreshortened for a couple frames. Might want to dim down the hand a wee bit just to make that more apparent. And maybe cover it up with the shirt sleeve a bit.
The animation itself is really quite good though. Good job.

[Cow]

This seems to me to be basically a carbon copy of the idleworm walking tutorial's animation. I'm all for using that as a base for learning, but not for exact replication. You even seem to inherit the elbow-joint issue from the tutorial. :/

[smiker]

yeah, i used that for reference, altough it's too big to make a carbon base for copying it, but yeah, nice eye, cow

[miscdude]

yeah, i used that for reference, altough it's too big to make a carbon base for copying it, but yeah, nice eye, cow

...please state these things and post a link to your reference when posting....it makes things easier...>_>