Nice edit bengo!
Played with this some more. Got a little better pose. I did go 2 pixels taller though. I like playing with the small stuff for some reason.
Hey, I love the exaggerated pose you did for this one! I had some free time tonight, so I just played around with the lighting and rendering to get a sense of the forms and the general direction the character is facing, without redoing much of your line work to keep it close to the original.
Side note to OP: If you want to intentionally have a black outline, try starting with a solid black silhouette, and once you are happy with the shapes and proportions, start to fill in your forms afterwards. This way you won't effect your sprites proportions too much, and can focus solely on colors, lighting, etc.