AuthorTopic: Need crit on a meteor pixel signiture updates 22nd Oct!  (Read 10768 times)

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Re: Need crit on a meteor pixel signiture updates 22nd Oct!

Reply #20 on: October 22, 2007, 10:00:29 pm
does a volcano eruption only go to one side?...I think you should make the explosion balanced so it doesnt looke like a giant fireball is about to crash into the earth  :P

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Re: Need crit on a meteor pixel signiture updates 20th Oct

Reply #21 on: October 22, 2007, 11:58:08 pm
Here's what I had in mind.


...shape of the meteor since the friction from the...

I'm not sure if that's a meteor, That Might be a volcano eruption.

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Re: Need crit on a meteor pixel signiture updates 20th Oct

Reply #22 on: October 23, 2007, 12:12:36 am
Here's what I had in mind.


...shape of the meteor since the friction from the...

I'm not sure if that's a meteor, That Might be a volcano eruption.

If a volcano eruption was that large it would probably be </earth>.

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Re: Need crit on a meteor pixel signiture updates 22nd Oct!

Reply #23 on: October 23, 2007, 12:19:09 am
The big ball is a meteor, to the right near the tree is a volcano erupting. I think having the tree and volcano eruption overlapping may be a bad idea. Perhaps have the volcano on the very right mountain instead.
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Re: Need crit on a meteor pixel signiture updates 22nd Oct!

Reply #24 on: October 23, 2007, 02:54:23 pm
I think enough is going on in the picture without the volcanic eruption anyways. It only distracts from the focus.

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Re: Need crit on a meteor pixel signiture updates 20th Oct

Reply #25 on: October 24, 2007, 12:23:00 am





Yes.

This piece has improved greatly, but don't be afraid to completely redo shading. I am not saying you have to, mind you. But it would be worth attempting to broaden your horizons, and trying something different. I am looking forward to the final product ;D
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Re: Need crit on a meteor pixel signiture updates 22nd Oct!

Reply #26 on: October 24, 2007, 12:58:55 am
dude, the chopped of head is too little.. add some more hair behind to make it round, and i suggest you listen to those advices, it would really rock if you make it darker and add more and stronger reflection becouse that comet is HUGE, and just take a lamp in a room for example.. or just little fire.. and see how much it lights up..

Keep it up, you have improved, lookin good.

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