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Dessert Panorama

on: October 06, 2007, 02:15:13 pm
ehrm....sorry about another topic in so less time but i can't make only one thing...and i need some help with this pic....can you suggest anything for it looking better (apart it has t be finished lol)?


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Re: Dessert Panorama

Reply #1 on: October 06, 2007, 04:07:18 pm
Are you going to shade the cloud? I think the penumbra on the cactus is maybe a bit too big. The dithered gradient in the sky needs to be spread out more I would've thought, with the sky being darker at the top than it is now. The antialiasing on the cactus is a bit sloppy. Also, I'd up the contrast by making the shadows in this darker, especially in places like the spray can where it seems to have no shadow.