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Offline Gameboy

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First notable pixel from a newbie

on: October 03, 2007, 05:13:27 am


The pixel desk is the exact desk that I'm sitting at right now. Isometrics are the way of the newbie, I suppose. C+C appreciated.

Offline Sherman Gill

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Re: First notable pixel from a newbie

Reply #1 on: October 03, 2007, 05:47:06 am
Nice wood texture :).

Most of the flaws I see are in the laptop, the main one of which is that it's SUPER high contrast.
You've got pure black right on almost white all over that bitch, and it's really disorienting and doesn't convey any actual information.
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Re: First notable pixel from a newbie

Reply #2 on: October 03, 2007, 07:56:11 am
Instead of outlining with black change the outline to a fairly dark version of the color it's boardering, so a dark grey on the laptop etc.

Also the desk legs look a bit weird. Great stuff though.