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Offline Coner

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*Warning for nudity*

on: November 15, 2005, 07:52:52 pm
I hope you wont blow of your chairs ;D



I made it a while ago, but i changed it now before i loaded it up, what do you think?  ;)

And this to:



Its not finished yet, but i wanted to know what to change before i starts with the cliff.
« Last Edit: November 15, 2005, 08:09:10 pm by Coner »

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Re: *Warning for nudity*

Reply #1 on: November 15, 2005, 07:56:53 pm
Gamma issue with black compared to other colors. Highlight on the shirt seems too fleshy. Maybe used the next darkest skin shade in its place. might be nice to see some more lighting on the face to build up depth. Not sure whether I would suggest more be done on the hair... interesting eye detail. Good work Coner.

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Re: *Warning for nudity*

Reply #2 on: November 16, 2005, 08:55:37 am
I think the face might do with a bit more definition and contrast, especially since the eyes and eyebrows are so strong. The breasts seem a bit too high up and perky, might be that that was intentional.
The scene will need a lot more contrast, especially since the transition from water to sky is pretty much fluent right now. Iīd either use some highlighting, or gradients for the sky. Again, more saturation would be good I think.

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Re: *Warning for nudity*

Reply #3 on: November 16, 2005, 06:22:47 pm
the breasts are completely un-natural. Womens breasts don't naturally stick together in the middle like that, unless they're some freak of plastic surgery or they are wearing a bra that creates such cleavage. I would suggest spreading them out a little bit, look at some porn sites for inspiration. Other than the breasts thing, it looks good.
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Re: *Warning for nudity*

Reply #4 on: November 16, 2005, 07:22:33 pm
haha, i will take your advise under some consideration Dogmeat  ;D Okey, i will make an update when i have run up some time. i'm quite behind my schedule

btw, i didnt say i wanted it to be realistic  ;)

well anyway, thanks to you
« Last Edit: November 16, 2005, 07:31:02 pm by Coner »

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Re: *Warning for nudity*

Reply #5 on: November 20, 2005, 05:01:12 pm
i absolutely love that water, finish it

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Re: *Warning for nudity*

Reply #6 on: November 22, 2005, 02:17:02 am
It does say Nudity :P



Try to think of breasts as giant sacks of fat, the drape across the chest from collar bone to the opposite side of the body.  Depending on age and a number of other factors, you'll have to decide how "perky" you intend to make these breasts.

The bottom has listings of A through D cups.
« Last Edit: November 22, 2005, 02:20:11 am by Scuba Steve »
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Re: *Warning for nudity*

Reply #7 on: November 22, 2005, 03:32:35 am
eh..scuba steve, thatīs not quite the ideal illustration for what you wrote. those are pretty obviously fake.

for getting the shape right, try imagining an arrow from the opposite collarbone (right where it meets the scapula) through the mid-point of the sternum. the breast will curve the most towards the part where the arrow is pointing (hope thatīs clear).

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Re: *Warning for nudity*

Reply #8 on: November 25, 2005, 07:03:11 am
You just paraphrased exactly what I wrote :P

And yes obviously those are fake since I found them on a site about BREAST IMPLANTS.  But the illustration still is appropriate, they just happen to be a bit unnaturally perky :P  They still sag down and to the sides like real breasts do... just artifically.  This is why I provided the alternative link with natural breast sizes.  I figured this photo was closer to what he was aiming for with his original shot.
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Re: *Warning for nudity*

Reply #9 on: November 25, 2005, 07:25:46 am
ehm. sorry about that. It was the whole picture not matching the text thing that threw me off. ;)