I mean besides the fact that its messy
No, in all seriousness, at this stage I guess you're really looking for anatomy crit--can't help you there. But might I comment on the shading/highlighting: if you are going to have that big sun thing be the light source--which is what I'm assuming right now--the highlights on the little guy wouldn't be on the side of the head, but rather, coming from the back/top, you know? But on the Gandhi-esque figure, I'd say you have the highlights down pat....perhaps a little highlight on the nose
probably not actually
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I also gotta say, right now it's not really readable if the little guy's tongue is hanging out or if it's one of those things......I think they're piercing but I'm not exactly sure :S. Anyways, you'll probably clear that up with time anyways.
Can't wait to see the finished product--pull through man!