[(very)WIP] Lady pointing birds.

[OzBlueShoes]

You honestly didn't read the grass tutorial that almost every single person here knows about, and has read.

Well, here it is:

http://www.zoggles.co.uk/asp/tutorials.asp?tut=3&page=11

And I really hope you have already read all of Tsugmos's tutorial:

http://www.zoggles.co.uk/asp/tutorials.asp?tut=17

[Orclaeder]

As a matter of fact i have read them both, the thing is i want grass ...thats not for tiles, because if i put my sig full of the grass the guy says in his tutorial, then i will get thesame thing over and over again .. i want difference, and i dont want it to look like a game pic, just like a normal pic .. but im currently experimenting a bit with grass so ill see what i get.
Thanks anyway 

[Orclaeder]

Well it kind of evolved to this, yes it's runescape related and maybe you dont like i post this update... but i just want to practice a bit and well i like runescape so i might aswell pixel about that. Please help me a bit with the what i got so far, i think the guy on the right is a bit off and i wouldnt know how to fix it so ye.. how to make it a bit better?

[Phlox]

Well i think the guy running, being shot or whatever is very skinny and his head is a bit small.  you should also add a bow string to the bow and maybe some of the ladies left hand visible under her right arm like she was going to shoot the bow.
 

[Orclaeder]

ye.. what can i say   

[robalan]

There's too much AA on parts of it; the spikes and her hair look very blurry due to over-use of the technique.  Quick tip: putting AA on the tip of something usually accomplishes nothing but blurring.  AA-ing 45 degree lines is usually about as effective.

The piece looks pretty good, but the AA is mostly un-necessary and only serves to blur.  Good luck finishing!

P.S. You might want to change your signature:

The maximum allowed size for a signature is 400x64 pixels, DON'T make it bigger or an admin will remove it, repeated nonappliance can result in getting strikes.

[philipptr]

I totally agree with robalan about the AA thing.
Also: why are they completly black while the bg is a daylight scene?
Also the lineart of the guy falling is not very good. For example the legs are to thin at some parts, and the upper body looks like its sitting 2-3 pixels too high

[Orclaeder]

Well we should be looking from out of a cave to the outside, the 2 persons are also in the cave, i know that there should be some lighting though but .. i dont quite know how i would do that, and if i delete the AA, then what should i put in place because .. well it will look to.. un-AA'd