Helms edit is more easy to fall for - not as 'chubby cheeked barbie thin', softer chin curve (feels like a nicer personality because of it), etc - though depending on your characters personality, all that may have been appropriate. In ND's, she seems more like a warrior, in Helms more like a school girl. Actually, makes me think of the girl from the Angel tv series who gets possessed by a demon and has her soul consumed and all that.
I don't know if it's just me, but I find small/extremely high/indents for eyebrows extremely disturbing. Not as much here as on people in RL who insist on plucking their eyebrows so they wind up halfway up their forehead, but a little strange anyway.