Hmm, interesting Kaki, I don't really like having a 3rd shade of green on top of the hood though, I think that helps making it look more metallic. Yours looks a bit more like a helmet rather than a hood compared to my latest edit.
I'm not going to use it, but I like what you did with the face and pulling the hood back a bit to show his hair more.
Probably the biggest problem aside from the hood, is the lighting on the nose and lips, I'm not trying to make them stick out of the hood, which is why I went more subtle on my lighting on the nose and the lips.
Here's my latest update... very little changed, I'm in the middle of trying to build a body for this guy...
*shrug*
I'm happy with how the face & hair looks, and fairly content with the hood in it's current state...
The body is going to take me a while
Thanks for the positive comments... who woulda thought I could do something like this?
Edit: I think maybe I should work more on my dithering "skill", not sure...