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Offline Triple

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Attempt on a Rat

on: September 10, 2007, 09:56:40 am
Well tell me what I can improve   ??? Cause it doesnt really look that good.

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Re: Attempt on a Rat

Reply #1 on: September 10, 2007, 02:49:54 pm
Rats should be grey, and the feet are very yellow.
you could also try to give it ears.

edit: you're right about the claws and teeth, but i still think that it would look better grey.
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Re: Attempt on a Rat

Reply #2 on: September 10, 2007, 03:05:54 pm
The rat has eres, and the yellow thing is claws xD
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Re: Attempt on a Rat

Reply #3 on: September 10, 2007, 03:11:58 pm
Rats aren't just grey.  The saturated yellow does stand out amongst the desaturated browns.  I'd up the contrast, and maybe work on the perspective.  As of now, we've got a top down of his body, but he seems to be looking more or less directly at us.