Samurai

[dich]

Lineart


In progress 1


In progress 2


In progress 3


To be continued ...

C&C welcome 

[Kazuya Mochu]

pretty cool. nice classic pose.

i do find it hard to see where the arm is going, as I can't really feel the prespective of the foreshortening.

nice environment. thoug some moon light would make it classic.

take care,

Kazuya

[dich]

well, thank you very much! 
i'll take your critiques into consideration 

[Peppermint Pig]

This is pretty good so far. I would suggest giving the snow a bluish gray color, since your sky is so dark. Perhaps reduce the contrast everywhere then... at least finish your composition in detail, then I can give some advice on colors. Keep going!

[dich]

Continue to draw samurai. Has redrawn some shadows, has added more details.
Anyway work is in progress



In progress 4


To be continued ...

[Hase]

I agree about the arm, another thing is the general stance - seems to me that the upper body is bent a bit too far forward, I think such a stance would mean he´s about to topple over.
other than that - looks good. looking forward to what you make of the second figure

[PyroPiranha]

This truly is one of my favorite WIP's I've seen in a long time of lurking.  I'm just concerned if that turquoise esque color you're using for the robe is final, because to be honest it seems to conflict with the general mood.  Don't ask for a technical explination on that, I think it might be an artistic thing, and I could be wrong.  None the less, this has plenty of potential, and I look foreward to the finished result.

[Rox]

So, I saw Flying Daggers yesterday... does that..?

Heh, nah. The pic's great so far. Really looking forward to seeing a finished piece come from this.

[Gil]

The mistake lies not in the arm, but in the hand. Try making the hand holding the sword five times as big as the other hand, this should fix the perspective...

[dich]

In progress 5


Well, thank you for all commentary, you have indicated me right way for further drawing.
As result, this variant of the unfinished picture.

Little (little? ho-ho!) has repcolored, has changed the cloth and has corrected the pose.

To be continued ...