[Help][Wip] Shading/Dithering ... (GUY) - now bird

[Ben2theEdge]

you're starting with the dithering way too soon - use solid colors and get the shading right first. Then, and ONLY then, go in and sculpt out the details.

[Genadinio]

Finaly i have decidet to finish it ok this is my new wip and i wan to create it normal from start till finish :
I want to draw battle bird with armour :




Ok i will wait comments about line art and then will try to shade 

[Phlox]

This is more like a raptor 

birds have wings its pretty much the definition of a bird.  If the bird is gonna have hands make them like wing hands not like claw things. Also bird wings/arms go down and back not down and forward that is also one of the reasons that this looks like a raptor

maybe these bird hands (but maybe too cartoony)